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The Immortal Wize

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lightness in the dark
If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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my father was a horse

my mother was a mule

I look like my mother and act like

my father …of course

with your weight on my back

I’m bound to go a mile or two

with no intentions on giving up…but

listen up… when I’ve had enough

I’m subject to buck

I won’t mumble a word of complaint

under your oppressing restraint

I’ll pack and pull tired and aching

until I feel by back breaking

from undertaking too much weight

because I know that there’s no use

for a broke back mule

so I’m telling you

I look like my mother

I act like my father

when I’ve had enough... of course

I’m subject to buck

 

 

 

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tretre says:

Very powerful piece! I had to read this twice because it had me thinking. As always a master piece has been written. Always keep that pen movin Wize Dom!

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2b2b2 says:

Ha ha....Tight Work....thoroughbred!

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