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just different 1 min read 608 views Jun 17, 2014

Chapter Captured

the chapter you're on

is nonsense

 

that's not in the

table of contents

 

let me out of your

acknowledgements

 

I can't let you into

my consciousness

 

I'm still holding my head

from reading what you wrote

 

 

in the chapter when

you pulled out the knife

 

on the pages I bled

so much red

 

i thought i would

be found dead

 

you're leasing too much

space inside of my head

 

I heard a noise

that's hard to avoid

I'm feeling paranoid

 

sleeping with

clack clack

beside my bed

 

my eyes started to close

I knew I had to stay awake

I felt a tremble

 

like a seizure

I started to shake

uncontrollably

 

something’s holding me

between the pages

like a bookmark

 

keeps memories

what genre is this

does this plot have a twist

 

hate through and through

I swear you got issues

who did you dedicate this to

 

so much blood and gory

no matter what I do

 

I can't seem to

find my way

 

out of the dark lines

of your story

 

 

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sonofsun5211

you should get a view for each time i read this.... lol.... Good stuff!

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Wordman21

Deep...Love it

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theyoungmc

i like this.

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