“been gone for about 5 months. ive written a lot. but i felt compelled to share my new piece "The Heart's Deception".”

Site rankBRIGADIER GENERAL

Awards

Karma 7,500 Blood stone

Poems snapshot

30Total poems
16,149Lifetime views
0Last 7 days
0Last 30 days
0Last 90 days
0Last 365 days

Join free to nominate, save, follow and join this poet's camp.

life 2 min read 448 views Jul 10, 2014

Truth

sit down and listen to my true words
don't cover your ears, yeah i know how much the truth hurts
"*** you"'s flying everywhere
the sound of gunshots fill the air
i just don't understand you people
you need to realize God made us as equals
people say judging is wrong, but they're judging people for judging others
people need to stop being enemies and see each other as sisters & brothers
we're all living in hypocrisy
oh, you aren't? stop right there, you're lying to me
others opinions are irrelevant
if they dont give me any benefits
say something that'll make me want to improve, something that'll give me water in my drought 
don't bring me words of negativity and judgement, because i wont have a *** to give out
if i go to church, ill get judged
if i go astray, ill get judged
if i speak my opinion, im told to shut the *** up
but let me pick up, where i left off
everyone's asking "where the love at?"
lets start giving love first, and others will learn to love back
these days it seems theres no time for that
but apparently theres time to stab our brethren in the backs
changes ain't gonna happen when "but thats none of my business" is recited more often then the 10 Commandments
we ain't achieving , i suggest we change our tactics
~PEACE

Discussions (0)

No discussions yet. Start one to ask about a line, share what the poem meant to you, or talk craft with other members.

Log in to start a discussion about this poem.

Comments (2)

Join free to commentPoets read every comment, and every one you leave earns karma. Registration is FREE.

Join free Log in
Contest winner

2b2b2

Great share.....ONE

Read 2b2b2's poems

PoeticallyGifted

im sorry. what?

Read PoeticallyGifted's poems

login below

Forgot your username?

 
Poets read every comment. Join free to comment, follow and save poems. Join free