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sonofsun5211
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just different

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My place Where writings erase A day's stress A day's mess In way less Than a day's time I crave mine As days wind Down I wade lines As deep as I am tall Just so I don't drown Some lose their head To find their crown I've found mine in it When I'm the only reader Why would I lie in it I've made my bed With silk sheets Listen as I lie in it...

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2b2b2 says:

Tight piece.....ONE

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sonofsun5211 says:

Thanks... I'm feeling it too.... But maybe it could have been longer.. Idk... Was livid about that rhyme scheme though... FIRE!O!

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sonofsun5211 says:

Thanks... I'm feeling it too.... But maybe it could have been longer.. Idk... Was livid about that rhyme scheme though... FIRE!O!

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Ladiva says:

Nice I like the flow of it,,,,

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