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just different 1 min read 764 views May 29, 2014

My Prisoner

I hold him prisoner

 

locked away inside

 

amongst the darkest of my heart

 

and the shadows of my mind

 

he yells from deep within

 

he wails his tales of sin

 

and could cause my tail to spin

 

if i let him out of his pin

 

i let him out with the pen

 

but sometimes it's not enough

 

this is why for me to be free

 

i must keep him locked up

 

and if he ever shall escape

 

a lot of hell has broken loose

 

know that you should be afraid

 

when I'm not walking in these boots

 

for he walks alone

 

not even a shadow of doubt

 

or the light of belief

 

can keep up when he's out

 

and only i can stop him

 

for i am him and he is i

 

but sometimes we can't concur

 

and don't see eye to eye

so i hold him prisoner

 

locked away inside

 

for he is the darkest of my heart

 

and the shadows of my mind

 

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tretre

Loved it...I hope you don't mind me sharing this one. I know a few people who would love this poem. Always keep that pen movin SonOfSuns!

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sonofsun5211

i truly hope it moves them.... that's the whole point in all of this right?... of course i don't mind....

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faiz_k

This is amazing bro, You continue to surprise me, Gotta do a collab someday.

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sonofsun5211

I've collaborated on many songs... but never thought of doing a poem with someone.... we should...

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love_supreme

I like this poem.

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