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odonko-ba
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Her beauty isn't measured by some European standard of what beauty should be but by her confidence and the fact that she is loving the skin she's in. To me, that alone is beautiful.

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Dreamer

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If I could dream

a dream of dreams

where every scene serene

and the only sound I hear

is the sound of your laughter

sweeter than the air I breath

I would sleep until infinity

nap til kingdom come

succumbs to my reality

in its totality

vicariously

seeing you as I

see you

my most beautiful angel

I would die

if not for fear of suicide

just to be by your side

again

just the two of us

like in the beginning

to hold your hand

to touch your skin

to kiss your lips

and gaze into your eyes

and dream

of what the future may bring

I didn't tell you

I love you that day

the day God decided

to take you away

from me

I was busy

distracted

just the thought of that

destroys me completely

so I sleep

and I dream

of what could have been

of what we ha

I sleep and I dream

for its where I find peace

it's where I find you

 

 

 

The CDC says that about 9% of Americans report they are depressed at least occasionally, and 3.4% suffer from major depression

 

 

 

 

 

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Poetiq1der says:

Peace and God's Blessings to you and yours...This is a fabulously written piece of Art....The words here flowed like the waters of the Zambezi River....Turbulent, troubled, then totally tranquil...
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2b2b2 says:

Great Work....Write On....ONE

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Odonko-ba says:

thanks poets
 

love_supreme says:

Excellent write.
 

Cjsmom says:

Beautiful visual and very well written.
 

LP45 says:

What an incredibly beautiful dedication. Loved every line. My condolences for your loss Odonko-ba, reading this was like watching a scene from a movie and I'm the only one in the theater. Thank you so much for sharing this. Keep writing. Namaste.

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