Envisions of pain tattooed in my brain
Decisions to abstain from behavior so vain
Precision in my work while I still remain sane
Divisions in the domain of what I have yet to gain
Detained by the rain
I’m drowning in disdain
Collisions of my thoughts and feelings I can’t explain
But I’ve maintained to contain my profane side within me
While I refrain from the inane actions that have been me
I must regain the strength to retain lifes length
And until what I’ve obtained is greater than what I have yet to gain
I won’t stop until I go insane
From sippin on Champagne or ran train in the hood
I’m like a Great Dane trying to be humane
I remain misunderstood
Restrained by misconceptions that could be good
But stuck in this mundane world that should be good
I could be good, I wish for your sake I would be good…
jnikic5
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i could be good...
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Luistala7 says: Daaaaaang I gotta admit, this is really good I'm kinda jealous haha no but seriously I think it's really really good, keep it up. |
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jnikic5 says: aw thanks!! preciate it :) |
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luistala7 says: No problem and actually after I read this one I went and read some more of your poetry and I really like "color me" it just idk... it was very powerful... for me at least. |
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jnikic5 says: i appreciate that...glad it meant something to u..thats actually my favorite one just bc even tho it may seem kinda general, there was so much emotion involved in that one. it was about something very specific in my life tho so i didnt know if it would make sense to anyone else. but glad u liked it! |
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Luistala7 says: Well idk maybe that's why, I mean I was immersed into the story probably because it was so emotionally powerfull for you and it kinda reminded me of a similar situation in which I found myself, and honestly I think it's one of my favorite out of all ive read, written, and heard. |
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jnikic5 says: wow that's awesome..thank you |
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DAPHNE says: i like this so much! |
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jnikic5 says: thanks daphne! |
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twistedbeauty says: beautiful poem |
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