“so in love! I'll give it all away.... just dont tell nobody tomorrow”

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just different 1 min read 645 views Jul 20, 2015

deep within

Deep within my mind a fantasy life exist,
deep within my tormented soul there's emptiness,
darkness is all around,
in this realm I'm bound,


I'm faraway from home,
completely depressed and alone,
deep within my flesh poison is bubbling,
and my rusted stark bones are quickly crumbling,


my deep wounds never stop bleeding,
the demons deep within me have stopped breathing,
it's gonna take more than one bottle of gin,
to completely fill the void that lies deep within

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amin901

very nice sweetie

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skyyberry1987

Thank you!

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2b2b2

Poignant penning....thanks for sharing!

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hymnagen

What a dark yet moving piece. I enjoyed reading it. thanks for the share

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