your poetry
your poetry...
dropped... from
its place in your mind
fell upon me...
defying gravity as it
suspending time+space
spun a web so tight
it created an alternate reality ...for me
a cloud... to climb
a place where i could dance
should i be so inclined...
to spead my cape...
in a puff of smoke
to escape... into a place
so neatly designed
iit almost blew my mind
as if you knew me...
focused your imaginary lines...
right into mine...
wiped me clear,
from the self imposed exile
transported
my essential elements
intact
across a portal between
our minds...
which
from my perspective
realigned
mine
perpendicular to the one
which you pursued
stepping through a hole in the skies
which you had so thoughtfully provided
for my imagination
to astral glide into...
...not being rude/
no ego tripping implied
a light reflecting from the heavens
from the stars between your eyes
and your view was so tight
hit me right out of left field
in a way that was surreal
in ways delightful...
gave me the thrill
i'd been waiting for...
left me wanting more
for a moment that lasts
no mistake ...i suggest
not being easy to impress
it's sexy and suggestive
to put it lightly, i'd say
...in a classy way
well defined...
bliss...
c2

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Peace and God's Blessings to you and yours...Fabulous!
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The power of poetry and the amazing journeys it gifts us. I enjoyed the ride, thank you.
Read Corey's poemsCharles2
Thank you both, gifted travelers for partaking in the journey
Read Charles2's poems2b2b2
EXCELLENT Work....ONE
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Thanks, 2b.
Read Charles2's poemsmlowe5
Thanks for the sail. Journey on my Brother. Eyes and ears are waiting to be filled. Peace and Love. Brother M. Lowe
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brother mlowe5, a pleasure...
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ONE: 1!...Peace and Love.
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Very nice.
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