Charles2

Pro member

“Anticipation”

Site rankULTRA ICON

Awards

Karma 223,500 Contest winner ×4 Blood stone

Poems snapshot

1,214Total poems
625,890Lifetime views
0Last 7 days
0Last 30 days
0Last 90 days
141Last 365 days

Join free to nominate, save, follow and join this poet's camp.

just different 2 min read 774 views Feb 8, 2016

your poetry

your poetry...

dropped... from

its place in your mind  

fell upon me... 

defying gravity as it

suspending time+space

spun a web so tight 

it created an alternate reality ...for me 

a cloud... to climb 

a place where i could dance

should i be so inclined...

to spead my cape... 

in a puff of smoke 

to escape... into a place 

so neatly designed 

iit almost blew my mind

as if you knew me... 

focused your imaginary lines...

right into mine... 

wiped me clear,

from the self imposed exile 

transported

 

my essential elements

intact 

across a portal between 

our minds... 

which

from my perspective 

realigned 

mine

perpendicular to the one 

which you pursued 

stepping through a hole in the skies 

which you had so thoughtfully provided 

for my imagination

to astral glide into...

 

 

...not being rude/

 

 no ego tripping implied

a light reflecting from the heavens

from the stars between your eyes 

and your view was so tight

hit me right out of left field 

in a way that was surreal

in ways delightful...

gave me the thrill

i'd been waiting for... 

left me wanting more 

for a moment that lasts

no mistake ...i suggest

not being easy to impress

it's sexy and suggestive

to put it lightly, i'd say 

...in a classy way

well defined...

bliss...

 

c2

 

Discussions (0)

No discussions yet. Start one to ask about a line, share what the poem meant to you, or talk craft with other members.

Log in to start a discussion about this poem.

Comments (9)

Join free to commentPoets read every comment, and every one you leave earns karma. Registration is FREE.

Join free Log in

Poetiq1der

Peace and God's Blessings to you and yours...Fabulous!

Read Poetiq1der's poems
Contest winner

Corey

The power of poetry and the amazing journeys it gifts us. I enjoyed the ride, thank you.

Read Corey's poems
Contest winner

Charles2

Thank you both, gifted travelers for partaking in the journey

Read Charles2's poems
Contest winner

2b2b2

EXCELLENT Work....ONE

Read 2b2b2's poems
Contest winner

Charles2

Thanks, 2b.

Read Charles2's poems
Contest winner

mlowe5

Thanks for the sail. Journey on my Brother. Eyes and ears are waiting to be filled. Peace and Love. Brother M. Lowe

Read mlowe5's poems
Contest winner

Charles2

brother mlowe5, a pleasure...

Read Charles2's poems
Contest winner

mlowe5

ONE: 1!...Peace and Love.

Read mlowe5's poems

love_supreme

Very nice.

Read love_supreme's poems

login below

Forgot your username?

 
Poets read every comment. Join free to comment, follow and save poems. Join free