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I talk till I’m blue
Still I don’t get through
screaming is the next best thing
Red with anger black with rage
we should sit and talk
If it were that simple to do
For me to talk to you
Trying to get through to you
is like being bare foot
climbing a mountain of glass
When I try talking to you
you put up your guards
like I’m throwing punches at you
I scream at your inability to
on up to what you’ve done and what you do
Oh yeah you’re a Christian
God is backing you
I’m from the devil I’m attacking you?
Badly bruised from the stones you threw
God watches me God watches you
God watches us two
How long will it be before God Snatches you?
How long will it be before God snatches me?
I don’t know what it is I want from you
I doubt if you could give me anything
“SCREAMING IS THE NEXT BEST THING”
I just want to be well
I don’t want to be sick no more
from the poison venom
of the umbilical cord
connecting me to you

 

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love_supreme says:

Wow, this is a very nice poem.

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nyny2013 says:

This is deep. I like this alot. Great work!
 

bekz580 says:

Powerful! I could feel the "rage"...true talent! Thank you!

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Ct.poet says:

wow...
 

CT.poet says:

Hey i saw your clip on youtube... nice

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just_zeek says:

This a good poem nice work
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The Immortal Wize says:

Thanks comrades!

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