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lightness in the dark
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Sounds Like a Love Poem

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romance

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I hear you loud and clear, your promises still tease my ears,

I was all baby, boos, and dear..

 I was the light in your day, and everyday you would say you love me more and more, in some sort of exceptional kinda way...

My presence was the contentment, that warmed your comfort zone, I was the home at the end of the corner with the little red door, and white perfect fence...

Us finding each other, you described as unbelievable,

ME

YOU

Two separate entities, turned impeccable I felt inseparable...

A bond like we shared was something Incredible... Even blinded by all the little Tale Tell signs, I close my eyes, playing Wifey in disguise...

I wanted to believe, you had the capabilities of a man of Honor,

Yet SURPRISE!!!!!!!

I'm once again faced with a situation of "real eyes" Seeing nothing but lies. All Lies, every ounce of your 'so called' love you placed inside, now burns multiple flames, all up in my insides!

Now I wanna lay alone, and hide! HIDE, because a women  my age should have know a little better,

An adult relationship has many more consequences, Making my tears that fall, just a little bit wetter.... Now I'm left bitter in your departure, I presume, in my case cupid isn't such a good archer...

lol

So now I'm just sitting at home, Alone writing a poem, which could have been a love poem.... Could have been....

Sounds like a love poem to you?

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love_supreme says:

This started out as true love and still ending that way. Excellent write.

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hymnagen says:

You carried me to heaven upon angels' wings just o cast me back down to Earth with this piece (and the landing hurt BTW! LOL) Thanks for a wonderful ride through this read! Lovely piece, debbieownsthis!

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2b2b2 says:

Tight Scope....searing conveyance....Bravo!!
 

debbieownsthis says:

Thank you guys!! xx
 

TamaraD says:

another excellent write!!!
 

debbieownsthis says:

TamaraD thank u so much for reading and all ur awesome coments!!! thankkk u
 

braymay88 says:

Enjoyed reading your work...powerful...
 

wesnesby says:

mmmmmmm ... nice

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