Corey
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CATEGORY
life
I
try to
hate you so
the memory of you won’t
haunt me
I
imagine
your touch like
daggers on nerve endings
not to miss it so much
and
your scent…
a stink of a highly threatened
skunk to keep you from my vicinity
in
my eyes
I create your image
hideous
not to gaze when I see you
it
won’t
be long before
all signs of you are muted
and even then…
I'll. still. miss. you.
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COMMENTS
Poetiq1der says: Peace and God's Blessings to you and yours...Hmm, very deep and also very humorous.... "Your scent...the stink of a highly threatened skunk to keep you away from my vicinity". This line is priceless... |
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Cjsmom says: I know the feeling too well...How can you love someone so much and hate them at the same time? Doing whatever you can to not think of them, with no avail. I loved this poem. It was a refreshing way to tell a sad tale. Kudos! |
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Corey says: Hi Poetiq1der, I've never thought of that line as funny before your mention. You made me think of the cartoon character Pepe` Let Pew. :) Thanks for the read and response! |
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Corey says: Hello Cjs, sometimes we need to do whatever we can to get (un)addicted from someone. Glad you enjoyed the poem. Thanks and come again! |
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Just_Me_Kelee says: Captivating... and all to familiar. I enjoyed the pen. |
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DallasCowgirl says: Bravo!! |
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Corey says: Just me Klee and Underhiswings7, Sometimes we gotta go all extra to kick the bad 'him' habit when he's no longer good for us. :) Thanks ladies for your support, peace. |
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Woven says: Sometimes we tend to cling to the good, you're right, we need to force ourselves to see the whole truth for our own good. Great write, I overstand this. |
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WarriorCarryingWater says: Nice flow! |
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